Mastering brevity to close more deals
Brevity – why is it important in reaching more prospects? In a world where the average attention span is only 8.25 seconds, you may be losing prospects simply because they aren’t staying engaged with your message. When potential clients check out mentally before hearing the whole story, it’s often due to a communication style that’s too lengthy or complex.

Many advisors focus heavily on information, benefits and expertise – but if that information is delivered in a long-winded, technical or overly detailed way, you’re likely missing the mark. The solution? Brevity. By getting to the core of what matters and delivering it concisely, you not only respect your clients’ time but increase the likelihood they’ll stick with you to the end and feel confident in making a decision.
Let’s dive into why brevity matters and how you can use it effectively.
Why brevity works in sales conversations
Our attention spans are shrinking in a world saturated with information, and prospects are exposed to a constant barrage of pitches. If prospects sense that your pitch is going to be time-consuming or overly complex, they may tune out before you have a chance to make an impact. The art of brevity helps you cut through this noise by presenting only the information that matters most, which improves engagement and builds trust.
When you master brevity, clients leave with a clear understanding of the value you’re offering, without feeling overwhelmed or pressured.
Signs your message may be too long-winded
Here are some signals that unspoken communication issues are getting in the way:
- Prospects’ eyes glaze over: If you notice clients zoning out or shifting their focus during your pitch, it’s likely that you’ve lost their attention.
- Confused responses: When you ask for questions and receive puzzled looks or unrelated questions, it can indicate that your message wasn’t clear or concise enough.
- Slow decision-making: If clients seem hesitant to make decisions or ask to “think about it,” it may be because they feel overwhelmed with information.
To overcome these pitfalls, let’s explore some concise communication strategies.
How to cut through the noise
- Start with key takeaways
Clients want to know “What’s in it for me?” immediately. Starting with a summary of the main benefits and points allows clients to understand quickly why your offer is relevant.
Example conversation starter:
"I want to respect your time, so let me jump right in. Here are the three key benefits you’ll get with this plan: protection, growth potential and flexibility."
This lets clients know exactly what they’re getting upfront and keeps their attention focused on what matters.
- Avoid industry jargon
It’s easy for professionals to fall in the trap of using industry jargon that clients can find confusing. Keep language simple, relatable and free of overly technical terms.
Example:
Instead of saying, "This policy has a guaranteed rate of return based on index participation rates," try:
"This plan allows your investment to grow with the market, giving you a secure way to build wealth over time."
This alternative is clear and emphasizes the benefit rather than the technical detail.
- Use visual aids or analogies
If a concept requires more explanation, visual aids or analogies can help you communicate it quickly without losing clarity. This approach makes complex topics more digestible.
Here’s an example analogy for indexed universal life:
"Think of your policy like planting a tree. Over time, it grows and provides more shade (or wealth), while its roots remain secure. Your money grows similarly, with built-in protections and the chance for growth."
This analogy simplifies the concept, making it memorable and easier for clients to visualize.
- Break down information into bite-sized pieces
When you need to cover multiple points, avoid overwhelming clients with too much at once. Break down the information into short segments and pause to check in on understanding.
Example:
"First, let’s talk about protection. This part of the plan ensures that no matter what happens in the market, your family’s financial future is secure. Does that make sense so far?"
Pausing here allows clients to process and ask questions, which increases comprehension and keeps them engaged.
- Use an empathetic close
Brevity isn’t only for explaining concepts but also for closing. Instead of lengthy or forceful closing pitches, make it clear that you’re putting the decision in their hands.
An example closing statement:
"Based on what we’ve discussed, it sounds like this plan could meet your needs for growth and protection. Do you feel this covers everything you’re looking for?"
This type of close is direct, concise and signals to the client that their opinion is valued.
Creating a culture of brevity in client communication
Even after your initial conversation, clients will appreciate follow-up messages that are to the point. By adopting a “less is more” approach in emails, presentations and phone calls, you reinforce a message of efficiency and respect for your client’s time.
- Follow-up emails: Summarize key points and next steps in bullet form.
- Social media messaging: Keep posts short, focusing on benefits rather than features.
- Appointment reminders: Use short, friendly reminders about the value of the meeting and what the client can expect to gain.
Bringing it all together: Brevity as a competitive advantage
Your goal is to educate, reassure and guide clients and prospects to make sound decisions. By mastering the art of brevity, you can do this more effectively. You’ll be the advisor who values their time, cuts to the chase and communicates clearly — qualities that not only help you close more deals but build long-lasting client relationships.
So the next time you feel the urge to dive into a lengthy explanation, remember the power of brevity. By focusing on what truly matters to clients and communicating that in an efficient, direct way, you’ll stand out in a world of information overload.
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Lloyd Lofton is the founder of Power Behind the Sales. He is the author of The Saleshero’s Guide To Handling Objections, voted 1 of the 11 Best New Presentation Books To Read in 2020 by BookAuthority. Lloyd may be contacted at [email protected].



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